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Impacts of technological advancement on organisation management and operations

 

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The comments below reflect the judgment of the University markers, moderated by the External
Examiner for the Subjects(s). The grade is the final agreed grade.
Structure
The research problem has not been clearly identified and justified. Chapter one does not provide appropriate and cohesive focus for
the research. Some examination of the use of technology by organisations and the impact of technological advancement to
management and resources has been demonstrated however the argument is sometimes unsubstantiated by the rationale or
commentary provided. Little theories and concepts are used to support the argument and set up the scene for the research.
Knowledge of relevant theories/literature
Discussion may be present but incomplete and the argument made is not consistently substantiated with reference to theory and
literature. Discussion on key tensions and debates within technology management literature is missing. The literature review chapter
could be improved by providing a coherent synthesis of literature related to technology management. Although some examination of
the importance of technology and its application is present, overall there is inconsistent argumentation and/or lack of clear discussion
of technology management.
Methodology
The methodology and methods chapters were poor. The discussion was inadequate and limited understanding of the various methods
of research was demonstrated. Several errors of understanding of concepts evident. The methods for data collection and analysis
selected for this research were not clearly presented. Some key information was either missing or poorly presented such as number of
participants/respondents, types of questions asked, answers to questions, number of organisations included in the research, where
these were based and their business context. There was limited evidence of interviews or surveys being carried out.
Work undertaken and analysis/interpretation of results
The findings and discussion chapters lack coherence with the research questions/objectives stated at the beginning. Tables and
graphs were poorly presented. Very few key issues were identified and/or mostly a focus on insignificant detail. Some points made
but may be weakened by several unsupported claims, assumptions and vague statements. The discussion could have been improved
by examining and evaluating the issues identified in more depth and using the theory and concepts to substantiate the argument.
Could have included many additional discussions supporting the different challenges that the organisation experience in harnessing
technology and the impact these have on the work force and the management of the organisation. There was limited consideration
given to the research questions and objectives. At times it was difficult to understand how the researcher has arrived to the
results/conclusions.
Recommendations/conclusions
Limited conclusions. No recommendations provided. It would have been good to see an evaluation of whether the research questions
were answered through the research and whether the research objectives stated were achieved.
Presentation
Adequate writing but ineffective use of academic tone. May be several errors which obscure meaning.
Uses sources in a limited way to support argument and relies heavily on single sources. Referencing (in text and reference list) and
presentation is recognizable as Harvard style but may be some errors or inconsistency.
MA/MBA/MSc Post Graduate Scheme:
Dissertation / Advanced Independent Study
Name
Impacts of Technological Advancement on the Organisation Management and Operations: a case of
electronic commerce Title
16/01/2015 Date Fail 45 Agreed Grade
2nd marker Signed 1st marker Vessela Warren Signed
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Page 1 of 1
The comments below reflect the judgment of the University markers, moderated by the External
Examiner for the Subjects(s). The grade is the final agreed grade.
Structure
The research problem has not been clearly identified and justified. Chapter one does not provide appropriate and cohesive focus for
the research. Some examination of the use of technology by organisations and the impact of technological advancement to
management and resources has been demonstrated however the argument is sometimes unsubstantiated by the rationale or
commentary provided. Little theories and concepts are used to support the argument and set up the scene for the research.
Knowledge of relevant theories/literature
Discussion may be present but incomplete and the argument made is not consistently substantiated with reference to theory and
literature. Discussion on key tensions and debates within technology management literature is missing. The literature review chapter
could be improved by providing a coherent synthesis of literature related to technology management. Although some examination of
the importance of technology and its application is present, overall there is inconsistent argumentation and/or lack of clear discussion
of technology management.
Methodology
The methodology and methods chapters were poor. The discussion was inadequate and limited understanding of the various methods
of research was demonstrated. Several errors of understanding of concepts evident. The methods for data collection and analysis
selected for this research were not clearly presented. Some key information was either missing or poorly presented such as number of
participants/respondents, types of questions asked, answers to questions, number of organisations included in the research, where
these were based and their business context. There was limited evidence of interviews or surveys being carried out.
Work undertaken and analysis/interpretation of results
The findings and discussion chapters lack coherence with the research questions/objectives stated at the beginning. Tables and
graphs were poorly presented. Very few key issues were identified and/or mostly a focus on insignificant detail. Some points made
but may be weakened by several unsupported claims, assumptions and vague statements. The discussion could have been improved
by examining and evaluating the issues identified in more depth and using the theory and concepts to substantiate the argument.
Could have included many additional discussions supporting the different challenges that the organisation experience in harnessing
technology and the impact these have on the work force and the management of the organisation. There was limited consideration
given to the research questions and objectives. At times it was difficult to understand how the researcher has arrived to the
results/conclusions.
Recommendations/conclusions
Limited conclusions. No recommendations provided. It would have been good to see an evaluation of whether the research questions
were answered through the research and whether the research objectives stated were achieved.
Presentation
Adequate writing but ineffective use of academic tone. May be several errors which obscure meaning.
Uses sources in a limited way to support argument and relies heavily on single sources. Referencing (in text and reference list) and
presentation is recognizable as Harvard style but may be some errors or inconsistency.
MA/MBA/MSc Post Graduate Scheme:
Dissertation / Advanced Independent Study
Name
Impacts of Technological Advancement on the Organisation Management and Operations: a case of
electronic commerce Title
16/01/2015 Date Fail 45 Agreed Grade
2nd marker Signed 1st marker Vessela Warren Signed

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